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Alone (Tanka)

 

 

She’s sitting alone

In this gloomy empty room

One sedate midnight

As the crescent moon smiles

Her flawed heart silently cries

 

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29 responses to “Alone (Tanka)”

  1. Creativetarns - Tania Hood Avatar
    Creativetarns – Tania Hood

    This is a sweet pod of pure poetic verse. Nice 🙂

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    1. ariyannmeii Avatar
      ariyannmeii

      Hi 🙂 thank you for liking my work ❤ I appreciate it 🙂 thanks ❤

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  2. dougstuber Avatar
    dougstuber

    You are good at this.

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    1. ariyannmeii Avatar
      ariyannmeii

      Thank you :))

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  3. DHEER Avatar
    DHEER

    So does Tanka mean alone in your language?

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    1. ariyannmeii Avatar
      ariyannmeii

      Nope .. It means short poem… It’s a Japanese word anyway:)
      *ask Google for more info:) lol

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      1. DHEER Avatar
        DHEER

        Aha! That ‘Tanka’… no wonder it sounded familiar.

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      2. ariyannmeii Avatar
        ariyannmeii

        ((: Hehe.. Yah :))

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  4. lordgodmose Avatar
    lordgodmose

    bravo

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      ariyannmeii

      :)) thanks

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  5. Sarah Elizabeth Lane Avatar
    Sarah Elizabeth Lane

    I love tankas, but I find them notoriously difficult to pen. Great job!

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    1. ariyannmeii Avatar
      ariyannmeii

      Thank you :))

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  6. seannapearl Avatar
    seannapearl

    I am in love with EVERYTHING you write!
    ~Sea

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  7. ariyannmeii Avatar
    ariyannmeii

    Thank you 🙂 I also love yours ❤ esp. the ones about autumn … They're awesome !

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  8. poetbennyking Avatar
    poetbennyking

    Awww beautiful writing… impeccable

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    1. ariyannmeii Avatar
      ariyannmeii

      thanks 🙂 that means a lot .. I’m so glad you like it 🙂

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        poetbennyking

        The gratitude is mine.. 🙂

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  9. Al Avatar
    Al

    So simple yet great imagery. Very good.

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      Arriane

      thank you 🙂 I’m so flattered ! 🙂 ❤

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      1. Al Avatar
        Al

        Any time. Keep it up am enjoying your work.

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    benditty

    Gorgeous words.

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      Arriane

      thank you 🙂 ❤

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    richwrapper

    Must go now and do Hurricane Irma preparedness stuff and did not see you on richwrapper until just minutes to go and closing down…but Alone blew me away and had to blog and like and say thanks for the great poem. Will be back electicity willing.

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      mOrg ;)

      Omg. Yeah. I’ve heard about that.. my best wishes for everyone’s safety over there.. please do take care. And thank you also for taking time to comment on this post. Keep safe and Godspeed ❤

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        richwrapper

        My favorite hurricane: not. Actually Typhoon Kate, spent in a small bunker atop a lone hill west of DaNang, South Vietnam in November of 1970. Caught a medical-evacuation ride out of there just as the eyewall hit us for a very entertaining helicopter ride back to the Air Force’s hospital where the showers were hot (and the food as well) and few took umbrage over hosting an orphan Marine reporter/photographer…especially one carring a six pack of beer in his packframe’s cavernous sack. When I got back to that hill, the 20-mile long, six-mile wide valley was 10-30 feet deep in floodwaters. War called off (mostly) on account of rain. May it rainlikethat everwhere man wars.

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    Swati.

    This is really beautiful!

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  14. phillister Avatar
    phillister

    Very beautiful

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  15. psiberite Avatar
    psiberite

    Well brought out. Very picturesque. Anand Bose from Kerala

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