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UNTITLED

She laid in darkness
Curled up in bed
Trying to embrace
What’s left in her.
Her endeavors to get through
Have come to naught
Yet she never stopped
And she’ll never stop.
She laid in darkness
And shut her eyes
Already embracing
What’s left in her.
A broken soul
Is what she’s got.
She could’ve stopped
But she didn’t…

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7 responses to “UNTITLED”

  1. Leroy Avatar
    Leroy

    much like myself i’m afraid… nice poem 🙂

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    1. Arriane Avatar
      Arriane

      I’m glad you liked it 🙂 thanks ❤

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  2. Cameron D Hamilton Avatar
    Cameron D Hamilton

    Wonderfully tragic. So much pain and written so beautifully. Great poem!

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    1. Arriane Avatar
      Arriane

      Thank you for that wonderful comment 🙂 have a beautiful day

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  3. Alexis Avatar
    Alexis

    Your poem reached me. Thank you. I’ll keep thinking sadly that She could’ve stopped…

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    1. Arriane Ü Avatar
      Arriane Ü

      Hi Alexis. Don’t worry. Everything will be okay ❤ just be brave and keep smiling.

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  4. Adhe Pradipta Avatar
    Adhe Pradipta

    It stings me… I feel it too. When your heart broke into pieces, you’ll find yourself lost and disoriented, not knowing when to get up and hit the day again.

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